영어 공부도 할겸, 요즘 나의 의욕상실과 태만을 치료할겸 이번주말에 이놈을 정독하는걸 목표로 해야겠다.
I am honored to be with you today at your commencement from one of the finest universities in the world. I never graduated from college. Truth be told, this is the closest I've ever gotten to a college graduation. Today I want to tell you three stories from my life. That's it. No big deal. Just three stories.
The first story is about connecting the dots.
I dropped out of Reed College after the first 6 months, but then stayed around as a drop-in for another 18 months or so before I really quit. So why did I drop out?
It started before I was born. My biological mother was a young, unwed college graduate student, and she decided to put me up for adoption. She felt very strongly that I should be adopted by college graduates, so everything was all set for me to be adopted at birth by a lawyer and his wife. Except that when I popped out they decided at the last minute that they really wanted a girl. So my parents, who were on a waiting list, got a call in the middle of the night asking: "We have an unexpected baby boy; do you want him?" They said: "Of course." My biological mother later found out that my mother had never graduated from college and that my father had never graduated from high school. She refused to sign the final adoption papers. She only relented a few months later when my parents promised that I would someday go to college.
And 17 years later I did go to college. But I naively chose a college that was almost as expensive as Stanford, and all of my working-class parents' savings were being spent on my college tuition. After six months, I couldn't see the value in it. I had no idea what I wanted to do with my life and no idea how college was going to help me figure it out. And here I was spending all of the money my parents had saved their entire life. So I decided to drop out and trust that it would all work out OK. It was pretty scary at the time, but looking back it was one of the best decisions I ever made. The minute I dropped out I could stop taking the required classes that didn't interest me, and begin dropping in on the ones that looked interesting.
It wasn't all romantic. I didn't have a dorm room, so I slept on the floor in friends' rooms, I returned coke bottles for the 5¢ deposits to buy food with, and I would walk the 7 miles across town every Sunday night to get one good meal a week at the Hare Krishna temple. I loved it. And much of what I stumbled into by following my curiosity and intuition turned out to be priceless later on. Let me give you one example:
Reed College at that time offered perhaps the best calligraphy instruction in the country. Throughout the campus every poster, every label on every drawer, was beautifully hand calligraphed. Because I had dropped out and didn't have to take the normal classes, I decided to take a calligraphy class to learn how to do this. I learned about serif and san serif typefaces, about varying the amount of space between different letter combinations, about what makes great typography great. It was beautiful, historical, artistically subtle in a way that science can't capture, and I found it fascinating.
None of this had even a hope of any practical application in my life. But ten years later, when we were designing the first Macintosh computer, it all came back to me. And we designed it all into the Mac. It was the first computer with beautiful typography. If I had never dropped in on that single course in college, the Mac would have never had multiple typefaces or proportionally spaced fonts. And since Windows just copied the Mac, its likely that no personal computer would have them. If I had never dropped out, I would have never dropped in on this calligraphy class, and personal computers might not have the wonderful typography that they do. Of course it was impossible to connect the dots looking forward when I was in college. But it was very, very clear looking backwards ten years later.
Again, you can't connect the dots looking forward; you can only connect them looking backwards. So you have to trust that the dots will somehow connect in your future. You have to trust in something ? your gut, destiny, life, karma, whatever. This approach has never let me down, and it has made all the difference in my life.
My second story is about love and loss.
I was lucky ? I found what I loved to do early in life. Woz and I started Apple in my parents garage when I was 20. We worked hard, and in 10 years Apple had grown from just the two of us in a garage into a $2 billion company with over 4000 employees. We had just released our finest creation ? the Macintosh ? a year earlier, and I had just turned 30. And then I got fired. How can you get fired from a company you started? Well, as Apple grew we hired someone who I thought was very talented to run the company with me, and for the first year or so things went well. But then our visions of the future began to diverge and eventually we had a falling out. When we did, our Board of Directors sided with him. So at 30 I was out. And very publicly out. What had been the focus of my entire adult life was gone, and it was devastating.
I really didn't know what to do for a few months. I felt that I had let the previous generation of entrepreneurs down - that I had dropped the baton as it was being passed to me. I met with David Packard and Bob Noyce and tried to apologize for screwing up so badly. I was a very public failure, and I even thought about running away from the valley. But something slowly began to dawn on me ? I still loved what I did. The turn of events at Apple had not changed that one bit. I had been rejected, but I was still in love. And so I decided to start over.
I didn't see it then, but it turned out that getting fired from Apple was the best thing that could have ever happened to me. The heaviness of being successful was replaced by the lightness of being a beginner again, less sure about everything. It freed me to enter one of the most creative periods of my life.
During the next five years, I started a company named NeXT, another company named Pixar, and fell in love with an amazing woman who would become my wife. Pixar went on to create the worlds first computer animated feature film, Toy Story, and is now the most successful animation studio in the world. In a remarkable turn of events, Apple bought NeXT, I returned to Apple, and the technology we developed at NeXT is at the heart of Apple's current renaissance. And Laurene and I have a wonderful family together.
I'm pretty sure none of this would have happened if I hadn't been fired from Apple. It was awful tasting medicine, but I guess the patient needed it. Sometimes life hits you in the head with a brick. Don't lose faith. I'm convinced that the only thing that kept me going was that I loved what I did. You've got to find what you love. And that is as true for your work as it is for your lovers. Your work is going to fill a large part of your life, and the only way to be truly satisfied is to do what you believe is great work. And the only way to do great work is to love what you do. If you haven't found it yet, keep looking. Don't settle. As with all matters of the heart, you'll know when you find it. And, like any great relationship, it just gets better and better as the years roll on. So keep looking until you find it. Don't settle.
My third story is about death.
When I was 17, I read a quote that went something like: "If you live each day as if it was your last, someday you'll most certainly be right." It made an impression on me, and since then, for the past 33 years, I have looked in the mirror every morning and asked myself: "If today were the last day of my life, would I want to do what I am about to do today?" And whenever the answer has been "No" for too many days in a row, I know I need to change something.
Remembering that I'll be dead soon is the most important tool I've ever encountered to help me make the big choices in life. Because almost everything ? all external expectations, all pride, all fear of embarrassment or failure - these things just fall away in the face of death, leaving only what is truly important. Remembering that you are going to die is the best way I know to avoid the trap of thinking you have something to lose. You are already naked. There is no reason not to follow your heart.
About a year ago I was diagnosed with cancer. I had a scan at 7:30 in the morning, and it clearly showed a tumor on my pancreas. I didn't even know what a pancreas was. The doctors told me this was almost certainly a type of cancer that is incurable, and that I should expect to live no longer than three to six months. My doctor advised me to go home and get my affairs in order, which is doctor's code for prepare to die. It means to try to tell your kids everything you thought you'd have the next 10 years to tell them in just a few months. It means to make sure everything is buttoned up so that it will be as easy as possible for your family. It means to say your goodbyes.
I lived with that diagnosis all day. Later that evening I had a biopsy, where they stuck an endoscope down my throat, through my stomach and into my intestines, put a needle into my pancreas and got a few cells from the tumor. I was sedated, but my wife, who was there, told me that when they viewed the cells under a microscope the doctors started crying because it turned out to be a very rare form of pancreatic cancer that is curable with surgery. I had the surgery and I'm fine now.
This was the closest I've been to facing death, and I hope its the closest I get for a few more decades. Having lived through it, I can now say this to you with a bit more certainty than when death was a useful but purely intellectual concept:
No one wants to die. Even people who want to go to heaven don't want to die to get there. And yet death is the destination we all share. No one has ever escaped it. And that is as it should be, because Death is very likely the single best invention of Life. It is Life's change agent. It clears out the old to make way for the new. Right now the new is you, but someday not too long from now, you will gradually become the old and be cleared away. Sorry to be so dramatic, but it is quite true.
Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life. Don't be trapped by dogma ? which is living with the results of other people's thinking. Don't let the noise of others' opinions drown out your own inner voice. And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.
When I was young, there was an amazing publication called The Whole Earth Catalog, which was one of the bibles of my generation. It was created by a fellow named Stewart Brand not far from here in Menlo Park, and he brought it to life with his poetic touch. This was in the late 1960's, before personal computers and desktop publishing, so it was all made with typewriters, scissors, and polaroid cameras. It was sort of like Google in paperback form, 35 years before Google came along: it was idealistic, and overflowing with neat tools and great notions.
Stewart and his team put out several issues of The Whole Earth Catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. It was the mid-1970s, and I was your age. On the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. Beneath it were the words: "Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish." It was their farewell message as they signed off. Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish. And I have always wished that for myself. And now, as you graduate to begin anew, I wish that for you.
Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish.
Thank you all very much.
'English'에 해당되는 글 13건
- 2010/04/23 Commencement Address by Steve Jobs (4)
- 2009/11/24 Writing English (2)
- 2009/04/14 [펌]사내 회의 영어 #2
- 2009/04/12 [펌]사내 회의 영어 #1
- 2008/05/29 English Presentation #3
- 2008/05/22 The outline of 3rd English Presentation
- 2008/05/02 두 번의 English Presentation 하며 느낀 몇가지.
- 2008/04/23 English Prensentation #2 (3)
- 2008/03/28 English Essay (4)
- 2008/03/05 Lose yourself by EMINEM
- Taking too much medicine may be harmful to your health.
- His only hobby is collecting coins.
- The girl suddenly stopped crying.
- I am used to searching for information on the Internet.
- I decided to start working out.
- You have enough intellect to solve the problem.
- We found a study group to take part in.
- They advised me to be on time.
- He brought his wallet out to show them a picture of his family.
- It rained too much to go fishing.
- I am pleased to meet you.
- I agreed to clean the kitchen.
- She denied cheating on the test.
- I object to rescheduling the meeting.
- Some people travel (in order) to learn about history.
- Watching too much television is bad for children.
- My favorite way to relive stress is running.
- Above all, I enjoy spending time with my friends.
- Through practice, I have become skilled at playing chess.
- Most people prefer working during the day.
- The best part of having free time is being able to rest.
- Older people should learn to keep their minds open.
- Leaders find ways to motivate others.
- People watch movies to take a break from reality.
- This helps students with low grades to improve their academic performance.
- The long summer vacation allows students to study abroad.
- To be truly successful in life, one needs to have common sense.
- Some tasks are too difficult to handle alone.
- It would be nice to live in an area with changing weather.
- I would like to live life at a very fast pace.
오늘 4개 틀려서, 800원 적립함. -_-;
자주 쓰이는 영어회화의 일곱가지 패턴
1. ~~ 로 시작하겠습니다.
Why don’t I start by saying that our profit margin has increased.
우리 이윤 폭이 증가했다는 말씀을 드리면서 시작하겠습니다.
2. 우리에게 절실한 것은 ~~ 입니다.
What we really need is look for another effective strategy.
우리에게 절실한 것은 효과적인 다른 전략을 찾는 것입니다.
3. ~~ 에 관해 ~~ 께 묻고 싶습니다.
I want to ask Mr.Lee about the press conference that will be held tomorrow.
내일 있을 기자회견에 대해서 Mr.Lee께 여쭤 보고 싶습니다.
4. ~~ 라는 당신의 주장을 입증할 근거가 있나요?
Do you have evidence to prove your claim that this is the best we can do?
이것이 우리가 할 수 있는 최선의 방법이라는 당신의 주장을 입증할 근거가 있나요?
5. ~~ 에 대해 구체적으로 설명해주시겠습니까?
Could you give us details on your idea?
당신의 의견에 대해 구체적으로 설명해주시겠습니까?
6. ~~ 를 명확하게 말씀해주시겠습니까?
Could you clarify what you’ve just said about our current situation?
우리의 현재 상황에 대해 분명하게 말씀해주시겠습니까?
7. 제가 이해한 것이 맞다면, ~~ 라는 말씀이신가요?
If my understanding is right, are you saying we need to go forward by the end of the week?
제가 이해한 것이 맞다면, 이번 주말까지 실행해야 한다는 말씀인가요?
전적으로 혹은 부분적으로 찬성을 표할 때
회의 중 다른 참여자가 한 말에 대해 찬성하거나 지지할 때 어떤 표현을 쓸 수 있는지 알아 보자.
I’m very impressed with your idea on this matter.
이 문제에 대한 당신의 아이디어에 매우 깊은 감명을 받았어요.
I agree with you completely.
당신의 의견에 전적으로 동의합니다.
I agree with you on that point.
그 점에 있어 당신의 의견에 찬성합니다.
You’re right in saying that we need to find a better way to solve it.
그 문제를 해결하기 위해 더 나은 방법을 찾아 봐야한다는 말씀이 옳습니다.
I agree with you to some extent, but we should think about the effective and possible strategy.
어느 정도 찬성은 합니다만, 효과적이면서도 가능한 전략이 무엇인지 생각해 봐야 합니다.
You’re right except that there are still several concerns to resolve.
아직 해결해야 할 몇 가지 문제가 있다는 것을 제외하면 옳은 말씀입니다.
둘, 다른 참가자가 한 발언에 대해서 적극적으로 지지를 보낼 때는 agree라는 동사에 completely, entirely, thoroughly 등을 넣어서 말하면 된다. ‘I completely agree with you’와 같은 표현을 쓸 수 있다.
셋, 반대의견이 전혀 없다는 말도 적극적인 찬성을 나타낸다. 예를 들어, ‘I’ve got absolutely no objections(전혀 반대의견이 없습니다)’ 혹은 ‘I’m sure that’s the best solution(그것이 최선의 방법이라고 확신합니다)’와 같은 표현이 있다.
전적으로 혹은 부분적으로 반대를 표할 때
I’m against your idea because that would take enormous time and money.
막대한 시간과 돈이 들 것이므로 그 생각에는 반대합니다.
Your suggestion is not a suitable way of decreasing the cost of delivery.
당신의 제안은 운송 비용을 줄일 수 있는 적절한 방법이 아닙니다.
I’m reluctant to deal with such a small start-up.
저는 그렇게 작은 신생회사와 거래하는 것이 망설여집니다.
I can see your point of view, but there’s not enough time for us to experience trial and error.
당신의 견해도 이해 되지만, 우리는 시행착오를 겪을 시간이 없습니다.
I agree with you up to a point, but I’m still not convinced that we should go forward with this.
어느 정도는 동의합니다만, 저는 아직도 우리가 이 일을 추진해야 할지에 대해 확신이 서지 않습니다.
[회의 중, 참석자의 의견에 대한 반대의 표현을 할 때의 Tip]
하나, 회의에서 참석자와 의견이 다르다고 해도 공격적인 투로 말하거나 격앙되지 않도록 주의한다.
둘, 다른 참석자의 의견에 의구심이 들어도 빈정거리거나 비난하는 투로 말하지 말고, 왜 그 의견에 반대하는지 정당한 이유를 제시해야 한다. 이때 대안으로 제시하는 의견을 말하는 문장 속에 maybe나 perhaps, possibly와 같은 말을 넣어 주면 더 부드러워진다.
셋, 적극적으로 반대의사를 표현할 때는 disagree와 같은 직접적인 부정의 말을 쓰는 것보다는 ‘I don’t agree with you at all(저는 전혀 동의하지 않습니다)’과 같이 동사 앞에 not을 넣어서 말하는 것이 더 좋다. 때로는 직접적으로 반대의 의견을 표현할 수도 있는데, ‘I’m in complete disagreement with you’ 와 같이 말하면 된다.
넷, 상대방의 견해가 잘못되었다는 것을 주된 내용으로 하여 반대의견을 표현할 수도 있다. ‘You’re totally mistaken(완전히 잘못 이해하고 계시네요)’라든가, ‘What you’re saying is not feasible at all (제안하신 것은 전혀 실현 불가능한 것입니다)’와 같이 말할 수 있다.
자주 쓰이는 회의 영어의 일곱 가지 패턴
1. ~~ 를 시작하겠습니다.
I’d like to open the our monthly marketing and promotion meeting.
지금부터 월간 마케팅 및 판촉 회의를 시작하겠습니다.
2. ~~ 해 주신 ~~ 께 감사드립니다.
I’d like to thank Mr.Kim from our Singapore branch for joining us today.
오늘 참석해주신, 싱가포르 지사에서 오신 Mr.Kim께 감사드립니다.
3. 저는(이 분은) ~~ 의 ~~ 입니다.
I’m (He’s/She’s) the marketing manager for the East Asian market.
저는(이 분은) 동아시아 시장을 담당하는 마케팅 매니저입니다.
4. 일정에 관해서 말씀드리자면, 늦어도 ~~ 시에는 끝내려고 합니다.
In terms of timing, our goal is to finish no later than 6:00 p.m.
일정에 관해서 말씀드리자면, 늦어도 오후 여섯 시에는 끝내려고 합니다.
5. ~~ 에 관해 개략적으로 말씀드리겠습니다.
Let me give you a rundown on what has been going on with the packaging and shipping process.
포장과 선적 작업의 진행 상황에 대해 개략적으로 말씀드리겠습니다.
6. ~~ 의 진척 상황을 말씀드리겠습니다.
Let me update you on the progress of recent approach with our new marketing strategy.
최근 저희가 새로운 마케팅 전략으로 접근하고 있는 것에 대한 진척 상황을 말씀드리겠습니다.
7. 오늘 우리는 여기서 ~~ 에 관해 논의하고자 합니다.
We’re here today to discuss the possible ways to meet our customers’ needs.
오늘 우리는 여기서 고객들의 요구사항을 만족시킬 수 있는 방법에 대해 논의하고자 합니다.
회의목적 설명하기
Before we get started, I have two announcements to make.
시작에 앞서 두 가지 공지사항을 말씀드리겠습니다.
I have an announcement to make.
안내 말씀드리겠습니다.
I have an announcement of considerable importance.
매우 중요한 공지사항을 말씀드리겠습니다.
The first problem of today’s meeting is to ~~.
오늘 회의의 목적은 ~~ 하는 것입니다.
The first problem we have to consider is ~~.
가장 먼저 고려할 사항은 ~~ 입니다.
1. 회의 안건(agenda)에는 참석자들의 명단(the names of the participants), 회의 날짜와 시간(the date and time), 장소(location of the meeting)를 적고 각 사항에 일련번호를 달아 두자. 참석자들에게 안건을 미리 이메일로 보내서 출력해오도록 해도 되지만, 만약을 대비해서(just in case) 복사본을 준비해두는 것이 좋다.
2. 회의에서 반드시 토의해야 할 사항이나 주제(items or issues)를 짧고 명료하게(short, simple and clear) 적어 두자. 각각의 토론에 얼마만큼의 시간을 할애할 것인지에 대해서도 결정해두는 것이 좋다. 구체적인 목표(specific objectives)가 있고, 결정을 내려야 하는 사안이 있다면 이 또한 명시해 놓자.
회의에서 발언하기
I would like to make a comment on that.
그 점에 관해 말씀드리고자 합니다.
I would like to state my opinion on this.
이 점에 관한 제 의견을 말씀드리고자 합니다.
I would like to say a word about your remarks.
귀하의 발언에 대해 드릴 말씀이 있습니다.
My understanding is that ~~.
제가 알기로는 ~~ 입니다.
I would like to remark on ~~.
~~ 에 관해 말씀드리려고 합니다.
Could I just make a point about ~~?
~~ 에 대해 한 가지 말씀드려도 되겠습니까?
1. 발언권을 가지고 발언할 때 너무 오랜 시간 동안 발언을 하는 것은 회의의 흐름을 끊고, 다른 참석자들로부터 따돌림을 받기 쉬운 행동이므로 지양하는 것이 좋다.
2. 분명하고 또박또박한 발음으로 너무 빠르지 않게, 모든 참석자들이 다 알아들을 수 있는 크기와 속도로 발언하는 것이 바람직하다.
3. 결론을 먼저 말한 다음에 그에 대한 설명을 덧붙이는 것이 효과적인 발언 방법이고, 얘기할 것이 여러 가지일 경우에는 순서를 매기며 말하는 것이 좋다.
Boys and Girls, Son and Daughters! Here comes a fabulous and useful thing as a present in the month of family, May. What do you think about this pretty stuff? Do not be surprised! This is a sweater hot-pack! This is the right thing to people who you love because it has wide uses, has strong durability, and it is cheap and easy to use. Ok! From now! Please ready to see this wonderful stuff.
This sweater hot-pack can help your body in many ways. When you feel joint ache, stomach ache or anything else, just apply this hot-pack and it will make you get relief from the pain. When you suffer from insomnia, then apply it around the backside of your neck and you will sleep in only 1 minute. When you don’t want to go outside because of cold weather, then take this hot-pack. Then you can go anywhere you want. See? This is a really really hot thing!
This sweater hot-pack has amazing durability. This is made of semi-permanent rubber so you need not worry that rubber may wear out. What about the cover? It will become dirty, of course. Then just put it into your automatic washing machine. It’s easy and simple right? And the warmth of this hot-pack lasts about 5 hours. In other words, you don’t have to feel cumbersome for about 5 hours. Just remember it will make you happy almost forever!
How much money do you pay when you drink some beers or soju with your friends? Maybe 10,000 won? 20,000 won? Please guess the price of this hot-pack. … … The answer is 15,000 won! Just Don’t go outside and drink some beers only 1 time, and then you can get this wonderful thing or prepare a nice present to your family, lover, and so on. Then I’ll show you how to you usethis. Open the stopple and pour hot water into it carefully, and close the stopple. It’s over really easy, right?
This sweater hot-pack is can be one of the best choice for you, your lovers, family and so on. You can use it in many ways, it’s so durable that you can use for long time, and besides it’s a great bargain, and easy to use. 15,000’s happiness. Just feel it and try it.
Hook/Attention Grabber : Sons and daughters! Boys and girls! Here comes a fabulous and useful thing as a present in the month of family, May.
Thesis w/outline : This hotpack is the right thing to people who you love because it has wide uses, has durability with a cute design, and it is safe and easy to use.
Body 1 :
- You can go anywhere with it when it’s cold outside.
- It reduces many kinds of aches.
- It helps you to sleep or take a rest easily.
- It can be an a accessory.
Body 2 :
- The warmth of hotpack lasts about 5 hours.
- It’s made of semi – permanent rubber
- Two cute designs(Cross, Heart)
Body 3 :
- You need not worry about scalding yourself with hot water.
- Rubber – stopple is absolutely safe
- You can fill hot water into it easily
English Presentation을 수강하며 5개의 단락으로 구성된 Essay를 지금까지 두 번을 써서 검사를 맡았다. 자랑이라면 자랑이겠지만, 검사를 맡으며 지적당한 것 중에 문장의 구성이나 흐름이 이상하다거나, 문장을 표현할 때 단어를 잘못 선택했다거나 등의 오류는 거의 지적당하지 않은 것 같다. 주로 관사나, 단수복수의 오류만 몇개 지적당했는데, 그런 것을 틀렸다고 해서 외국사람이 의미를 잘못 이해한다거나, 이해하지 못한다고 생각하지는 않는다.
Sean선생님이 내가 쓴 에세이를 훑어보더니 관사 빼먹은 것, 단수 복수 일치하지 않는 것 3~4개 정도 고쳐주더니 excellent! 라고 칭찬했을 때 나름 보람을 느꼈다 -_-ㅋㅋ
애초에 에세이를 쓸 때, 관사나 단수 복수 표현 혹은 시제의 일치에도 물론 신경을 쓴다고 썼지만 내가 가장 신경을 쓴 부분은 자연스러운 표현이었다. 다시말해 단순히 우리말을 직역하여 영어로 써서 원어민이 당최 무슨 말인지 이해할 수 없는 그런 문장을 쓰지 않는 것을 목표로 삼았다. 그게 확실히 효과를 본 것 같다.
그리고 동사를 쓸 때, 단순히 동사 하나만 쓰는 것이 아니라, 동사 + 명사의 표현을 많이 쓰려고 노력하였다. 실제로 예전에 어디선가 동사 + 명사의 표현이 동사1개로 표현하는 것보다 훨씬 자연스러운 표현이라고 들은적이 있기 때문이다. 예를들어 decide대신 make a decision을 쓴다거나, look대신에 take a look 것 말이다.
그리고 어려운 단어보다는 예문 검색을 통해 가장 많이 쓰이면서도 쉬운 단어를 많이 쓰려고 하였다. 이유는 간단하다. 왜냐? 내 어휘실력이 아주 보잘 것 없고, 어려운 단어가 많이 들어가면 나중에 외워서 발표할 때 막힐지도 모른다는 생각때문이었다. Speech를 평가할 때, Body Language, Volume, Eye Contact, Pitch(Intonation)를 잘해야 하는데, 이걸 하려면 당근 Essay를 줄줄이 외우는 것은 기본인데, 사실 외우는게 제일 힘들다. 고로 외우기 쉬우면서도 어색하지 않는 표현을 쓰려고 하였다.
두 번째 Essay 그리고 발표가 끝났다. 마지막 까지 별 탈없이 잘 해야 될텐데..
Can you imagine that teachers and students speak only in English in all classes in Korean public school? I object to the plan ‘English-only classes in public schools’ because not all Koreans need to speak English fluently, the plan will bring about the jump of private education expenses, and besides it will weaken our national consciousness and pride as Koreans.
How many jobs are there which require the ability of speaking English here in Korea? For example, does a bus driver need to speak English when he's working in a bus? How about an engineer? It's enough to read English books or have a simple conversation ability. I think it's more effective to teach some students concentratedly who really need to speak English very fluently than to teach all students. The president and new government should take cognizance of the concept about selection and concentration.
What would happen if 'English-only classes in public schools' comes true? The answer is obvious. Students would have to hear and speak English well in order to understand what a teacher teaches in English, and parents would spend more money on their children's private education. This is not a hypothesis but a reality in Malaysia in which the plan has been working since 2002 and parents suffer from high expanses on private education.
Korean is the one of the most advanced languages in the world which many linguists demonstrate the superiority. In other words, we must be aware of the rights and obligations to take pride in our language, Korean. In addition, a language is an important factor that reflects our thoughts and culture and if the plan comes into reality, young and naive students would probably lose their national consciousness. The government should know that a language is the one of the strongest defense systems that keeps us from losing our identity.
I'm not saying English is not important in Korea. However, What I'm saying is that the plan of 'English only classes in public schools' lacks planning and consideration. My opinion is that we should select and concentrate on people who really have to speak English, the plan would not solve the high education expenses problem but make it worse, and Korean is such an important weapon and shield in the culture war that we have to protect it. The government should think deeply and reconsider this ironic and stupid plan.
영어 프리젠테이션에서 발표할 것. 일단 5개의 paragraph로 된 글을 쓰고, 원어민 선생님한테 보여주고 검사받고 다음주 목요일날 싸그리 외워서 발표를 해야한다.
원어민 선생님이 제시한 에세이 스타일은 다음과 같다.
- 자신에게 중요하거나, 의미가 있는 물건을 사람들에게 show and tell 방식으로 presentation할 것.
- 5개의 문단(Paragraph)로 하여 Intruduction(1), Body(3), Conclusion(1) 로 구성할 것.
- Introduction의 첫 번째 문장은 Attention Grabber(or Motivator)로 할 것
- Intruduction에는 반드시 thesis(주제문)과 그를 뒷받침하는 3개의 outline문장으로 구성될 것.
- 3개의 outline 문장은 3개의 body paragraph와 연관이 되어야함. 즉 각각의 paragraph와 연계가 되어야 함.
- 가급적이면 emotional한 단어나 표현을 많이 구사할 것.
- 문단과 문단, 문장과 문장의 연결 흐름(transition)을 부드럽게 할 것
- concluding paragraph에는 thesis를 재강조하고, 3개의 body paragraph의 내용을 요약하되 이전에 썼던 표현이나 단어와 다르게 할 것(이게 제일 힘들었음. -_-; 나의 부족한 보카실력이란 ...)
몇몇 학생의 에세이는 그야말로 싸그리 난도질 당하기도 했지만, 내가 쓴건 그나마 난도질을 덜 당한거 같아 나름 뿌듯하다. 그런데 외울 생각을 하니 하늘이 노랗다. -_-
English Essay
Make your lips glossy and sexy and you’ll be kissed! I got this lip moisturizer December 30th 2006 from my girl friend. This is one of the most meaningful things to me because it keeps my lips healthy, it’s the first thing I received from my girl friend, and it reminds me of times my girl friend and I started to love each other.
Lip is an important part of our face. By the way, when the weather is dry and cold, lips are not only parched but also bleed. Lip moisturizer can protect lips from getting dry and bleeding. Moreover after you put on lip moisturizer, your lips become glossy and healthy and your girl/boy friend may perhaps feel you’re so sexy that he/she wants to kiss you.
In 2006 winter, while my girl friend and I were enjoying some cocktails and chatting in a bar, suddenly she took something out from her bag and gave it to me, and told me “Happy New Year.” The present was this lip moisturizer. The first gift is very emotional to me as much as first love, first kiss, and so on. This is the first thing I’ve got from my girl friend.
Seeing this lip moisturizer I recall that my girl friend and I fell in love each other. When I could not be sure whether she loved me as much as I do her, I was encouraged by the presentation, lip moisturizer. Finally I proposed to her to be my girl friend, and then she became my girl. And besides When I kissed her in Ilsan Lake park I was wearing this moisturizer. Our love started and continues with this lip moisturizer.
I will never forget this lip moisturizer, and always keep it seriously. My lips looked sexy due to this lip moisturizer, This is the first present from my only girl, and this is the starting point of my love. Although this lip moisturizer ran out, instead my happy memory is going to last forever in my mind.
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내가 제일 좋아하는 힙합곡. 정확하면서도 신속한 발음, 플로, 라임 빠진 구석이 하나도 없는 명곡.
"Lose Yourself"
Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted-One moment
Would you capture it or just let it slip?
His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgettin
What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's choking, how everybody's joking now
The clock's run out, time's up over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Easy, no
He won't have it , he knows his whole back's to these ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that, but he's broke
He's so stagnant that he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again yo
This this whole rhapsody
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him
[Hook:]
You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo
The soul's escaping, through this hole that it's gaping
This world is mine for the taking
Make me king, as we move toward a, new world order
A normal life is boring, but superstardom's close to post mortem
It only grows harder, only grows hotter
He blows us all over these hoes is all on him
Coast to coast shows, he's know as the globetrotter
Lonely roads, God only knows
He's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
But hold your nose cause here goes the cold water
His hoes don't want him no mo, he's cold product
They moved on to the next schmoe who flows
He nose dove and sold nada
So the soap opera is told and unfolds
I suppose it's old partner', but the beat goes on
Da da dum da dum da da
[Hook]
No more games, I'ma change what you call rage
Tear this motherfucking roof off like 2 dogs caged
I was playing in the beginning, the mood all changed
I been chewed up and spit out and booed off stage
But I kept rhyming and stepwritin the next cypher
Best believe somebody's paying the pied piper
All the pain inside amplified by the fact
That I can't get by with my 9 to 5
And I can't provide the right type of life for my family
Cause man, these goddam food stamps don't buy diapers
And it's no movie, there's no Mekhi Phifer, this is my life
And these times are so hard and it's getting even harder
Trying to feed and water my seed, plus
Teeter totter caught up between being a father and a prima donna
Baby mama drama's screaming on and
Too much for me to wanna
Stay in one spot, another day of monotony
Has gotten me to the point, I'm like a snail
I've got to formulate a plot fore I end up in jail or shot
Success is my only motherfucking option, failure's not
Mom, I love you, but this trailer's got to go
I cannot grow old in Salem's lot
So here I go is my shot.
Feet fail me not cause maybe the only opportunity that I got
[Hook]
You can do anything you set your mind to, man